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Naming characters can be such a challenge! But it's not nearly as difficult as remembering what I've named them.

For my first four or five books, I kept an ongoing list of names I'd used so that I'd be careful not to re-use them. Somewhere around book six, I got sloppy or busy or both, and let my list of names slip off my list of things to do. Now, as I begin book number nineteen, I realize I simply must know what names I've used before.

I have a new, wonderful assistant, and I've given her the task of going through each of my books, making a list of first names, surnames, and fictionalized place names and the book in which each was used. The main characters' names are marked with asterisks, since I want to be sure not to re-use them in particular. So far, my assistant's made it through six of my books, and her spreadsheet already shows 237 first names, 118 surnames and 46 place names! Glancing over the list, I barely remember who some of these folks are. I saw that I'd used the name "Sylvie" in all three books of the Keeper of the Light trilogy. The name was familiar, but only vaguely. Who the heck was Sylvie? Turns out she was one of the character's cats.  

A reader named Shelly once wrote to me to ask why I used the name "Shelly" so often in my books. I did? I had no idea, but in the six books already culled through, Shelly already appears twice, albeit with different spelling.

Why is it important not to re-use names? In the big picture, it probably isn't, but I imagine one of my readers reading two of my books back to back, each with a character named Shelly and feeling at best, surprised by my choice in names, and at worst, confused over which Shelly she's reading about. This becomes particularly important with surnames. I don't want to make unrelated characters look like they're part of the same family, but it's an easy slip to make. We all have names (and phrases and vignettes) floating around in our minds, and when one of these pops into our heads while writing, it may seem fresh and new, but we're really just tapping into that same old well of our memory. It's the only one we have (which is why it's important to refresh it from time to time, but I'll save that discussion for a different post!) 

I have a few resources I use when naming characters. Baby name books, of course. I have several of those and I relied on them heavily in the days before the Internet gave me better options. Now, I often go to the Social Security Administration, where you can see which names were popular in which year. For example, a character I'm writing about right now was born in 1942, so I can see that Mary, Barbara and Patricia were the top three female names that year. I can dig as deep into the list as I choose. There's also a feature in which you can plug in your name or another to see how popular it's been over the years. Diane, for example, peaked in 1955 when it was the 14th most popular girl's name. (It now ranks 906th).

For surnames, I love the phone book. I think that's the only thing I use the phone book for anymore. I also like the obituary column of my local newspaper to help me find some wonderful old North Carolina names when NC is the  setting for my work-in-progress.  

Once I have a few names to choose from, I try them on to see which feels right for a particular character. I can usually tell within a few pages if I've hit the correct name. It's rare that it happens right off the bat. One character in this outline has been Sybil, Grace, and Barbara all in the last few hours. I see on my handy-dandy new names list that I've already used Grace for a central character, so I think I'll scratch that one. Sybil sounds a bit too "multiple personality-ish." And this character really is not a Barbara, so I'm going back to the Social Security admin page.

 Maybe I'll see you there.

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Those of you who've read Before the Storm know that one of the main characters, Laurel Lockwood, develops post partum depression after the birth of her baby Maggie. With the depression undiagnosed and severe, she begins to drink as a way to escape her sadness and shame. She continues to drink wine coolers even after learning she's pregnant with her son, Andy, who is born with Fetal Alcohol Spectrum Disorder.

Writing about Laurel with sympathy was my challenge. Reading about her with sympathy has been a challenge for some of my readers as well. Jodee Kulp is one such reader, and her opinion is important to me because Jodee served as my FASD consultant as I wrote about Andy. You see, Jodee is the mother of an adopted daughter with FASD and the author of several books on the subject, as well as an upcoming novel, The Whitest Wall, featuring an FASD character. Jodee has been a close witness to the havoc maternal drinking can take on an unborn child. Letting Jodee read Before the Storm was a bit nerve wracking! I knew how hard it would be for her to read about Laurel's behavior. Here's a little bit of what Jodee had to say:   

I struggled with Laurel as she struggled with her alcoholism and depression, knowing what she was creating, understanding the damage she was doing to the small person growing within, knowing with my own angst. I rejoiced in her rehabilitation . . . Life itself has many twists and turns and true to life, what often appears to be reality is only bits of truth. Before the Storm does justice to the work of families struggling with alcohol and its many outcomes. It does justrice to the reality of human frailty and interconnected relationships. . . .I hope Diane's work will add awareness of fetal alcohol spectrum disorder to those who need to know.

 

I can only imagine how hard it must have been for Jodee to keep an open mind as she read about Laurel and I'm pleased I was able to make her into a character Jodee could ultimately care about. What do you think? Whether you've read Before the Storm or not, do you think you could have sympathy for someone like Laurel? 

 

I've taken a tiny break from the blog as I train myself in using my new Blackberry, along with Outlook, Word and a few other torturous inventions designed to move me into the twenty-first century. So while I'm doing that, I thought I'd share this video John made for Barefoot Contessa Photo Adventures, nature photography workshops he teaches along with two other photographers. John's the workshop's master of digital printing. I hope you enjoy it, and I'll be back with a fresh blog post in a day or two.

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My neighborhood bookclub met tonight to discuss Julie and Julia, by Julie Powell. (For those of you who don't know, twenty-nine-year-old Julie Powell set a goal of making every recipe in Julia Child's Mastering the Art of French Cooking--all in one year, in a tiny apartment in New York. Lots of stocks made from scratch, jiggly aspic, organ meats and the slaying of lobsters. The movie version comes out next year.).  I would say we had mixed feelings about the book, but we loved our hostess's yummy French-inspired refreshments and the good company. 

However, this post is really not about that.

When several writers get together and they witness or overhear something fascinating that simply cries out to be in a story, one of them is sure to scoop up the morsel and claim it as her own before the others have a chance to grab it. At bookclub tonight, I heard just such a morsel, and since I don't think it will ever fit into one of my books, I'm hereby offering it to whoever wants it. It's just to good to pass up!

One of the bookclub members told us that when she and her husband were house hunting in our neighborhood, they fell in love with one particular house. As they toured it, walking from room to room, they knew it was perfect for their growing family. The owners had already moved out all of their furnishings and the house was empty. . . except for a box on the kitchen counter. You've probably already guessed what was in the box: The human skull was surrounded by a bit of dirt, as if it might have been excavated only recently. Even those of you who don't write must be wondering "Why? Why? Why?" Needless to say, my neighbor and her husband decided to continue their search for a house elsewhere. 

The obvious thing, and it could make a yummy short story, is that a nasty divorce battle resulted in the husband losing the house to his wife, who then needs to sell it. The husband sabotages the sale by planting the skull, because seriously, who'd buy a house with a skull in the kitchen? You'd never be able to walk in that room without picturing that icky box. But I bet a clever writer could come up with something less obvious, so I offer this impossible-to-pass-up morsel to you writers out there. Please do something wonderful with it. I bet this skull would make a delicious stock.

 

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Years ago, while working on my fourth book, Keeper of the Light, I hired writing consultant Peter Porosky to help me brainstorm the plot and structure. I lived in Virginia at the time, and Peter lived nearly an hour's drive away from me in Maryland. He'd read my initial outline and we got right down to work, talking about characters and storyline. I already loved the story I had in mind, but talking about it with another writer was thrilling. Peter would never tell me what I should do, but he talked about what worked and what didn't and prompted me to come up with my own solutions. (An ironic aside: one of the many twists in Keeper of the Light came to me during this conversation when Peter accidentally referred to one character by the name of another, which started a whole series of "what ifs?" in my mind and ultimately changed the entire story!) When I left Peter's house, I got in my car and started the drive home, stuffed full of ideas, my mind a thousand miles away from the road. It's hard to describe the excitement I felt. If you're a creative person, perhaps you know what I mean. You hit on an idea, and it begins to take off, spinning out in a dozen different directions. It's not only your mind that's reacting to the thrill of discovery. Your entire body feels engaged and your fingers itch to get going on the project. It's a creative person's Nirvana.

Anyway, I was driving home and I finally noticed a sign along the highway for the Baltimore-Washington Airport. Huh? I struggled to pull my mind back to the here-and-now and realized I'd gotten on the highway going north instead of south. Totally oblivious to my surroundings, I'd driven a full thirty miles in the wrong direction. I didn't cuss or fret. I didn't care. I didn't care if I ended up at the North Pole. I was working on a story!

So yesterday, I was driving home from Starbucks. My car should know this route automatically by now, even if I'm not paying attention, but no. I ended up in Wake Forest, a town way north of where I live. I stopped at red lights, avoided pedestrians, and stuck to the speed limit, but my mind was clearly on a North Carolina beach with some new characters who have stolen my heart. These folks are not only affecting my driving, but the rest of my life as well. I can't tune them out. They have so much to say to me and they're full of surprises, forcing me to take notes when I should be sleeping and making me blurt out things like "Oh, wow!" in the checkout line of the grocery store and not even feel embarrassed about it.

People often ask me "What's your favorite part of writing a book?" This is it. The Nirvana part. The writing while driving part. Even at $4.30 a gallon, it's worth it.   

 

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I'll be doing a live chat at The Happy Bookers Club Monday evening at 8:30 pm, EDT. You need to register at their site, but then just click on "chat" in the menu and we can talk books!

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This is so cool!

This article appeared in the summer issue of Topsail Magazine. Now Glen Pierce, one of our frequenter commenters here on the blog, put the article up on the Topsail Island website. The writer, BJ Cothran, did such a great job with it and I know she generated lots of interest in my books among vacationers, many of whom showed up at the signing at Quarter Moon Books.

I hope you enjoy it.