Giving Thanks

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thanksgiving dog.jpgAs I wait to hear from my publisher, I think it’s time for me to focus on all I have to be thankful for. It’s always easy to dwell on what’s wrong instead of what’s right, isn’t it? So here goes:

  • I’m employed, when so many people are not. What a difficult holiday season it must be for them, and how fortunate I am to be able to make a living doing something I love.
  • I have an agent  who’s always in my corner and a publisher who believes in me.
  • I have a partner who loves me and supports me in everything I do.
  • I have fantastic siblings, amazing stepdaughters, and adorable and healthy grandbabies.
  • I have friends, old and new, who are always there for me, even when I’m lazy about keeping in touch.  
  • I have a house I love. . . and there’s no threat of foreclosure hanging over my head.
  • I live in a time when there’s real treatment for rheumatoid arthritis, enabling me to type for hours upon hours. 
  • And I have you–my readers–without whom my work would be meaningless. I appreciate all of you more than you know.  

My heart’s bursting with joy as I think about all I have to be thankful for. How about you? What are you thankful for in this challenging year? 

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After taking a break for the election and to talk about my cute new UK cover, I’m following up on my recent posts about creating a story.

You may recall that I hadn’t quite finished the synopsis for my next book while in the Outer Banks. Once I got home, I whipped through to the end. . .well almost to the end. My last sentence reads: Brilliant last sentence goes here. LOL.

So I emailed the synopsis and its lame final sentence to my agent, who quickly got back to me with the news that she loved it. Since she loves it and I love it, this is the synopsis we’ll take to my publisher. . . soon. My agent and I both recognized what is missing from the synopsis: suspense. That’s the element I’m building into the story this weekend.

I don’t care what kind of story you’re writing, it needs an element of suspense to keep the pages turning. Those of you who’ve read my books know that, even though my stories may not fit the definition of “suspense novels,” in the usual sense of the term, they are suspenseful. Even the books that are focused on relationships have elements of suspense in them. The reader wants to know what’s going to happen next. This doesn’t occur by magic. It takes planning and the sort of thinking that makes your head ache, but it’s oh so worth it in the end. 

So how does a writer add suspense? One tried and true method is the ticking clock. The reader knows that, if a character doesn’t do X by a certain time, Y will happen, and that will be devastating. Many other conflicts can create suspense. In Before the Storm, will a special needs boy go to prison for something he (probably) didn’t do? And how far will his mother go to protect him? In The Secret Life of CeeCee Wilkes, will a woman tell the truth about what happened even though it will cost her her family and her freedom? 

One of my favorite ways of adding suspense is to give each character a secret. I may not use them all, but in the “thinking stage,” I actually write down what each character’s secret is–we all have them; don’t try to tell me you don’t! Then I see whose secret can tie into the storyline. And then I drop hints to make the reader sit up and take notice. In Before the Storm, for example, I continually allude to the fact that Laurel distrusts her former brother-in-law, Marcus, but the reader doesn’t know why. I reveal this fact from both their points-of-view, over time, increasing the curiosity of the reader to find out what led to the serious rift in their relationship. (Then, of course, there needs to be a pretty powerful reason for the distrust, or the reader will be quite annoyed with me, but that’s for another post.)

So today, I’m adding suspense to my synopsis in several ways: 1) I’m changing the order of how I reveal what happens, so that the reader (editor, in this case) will want to know what’s going to happen next. In other words, I’m taking care not to reveal too much up front; 2) I’m “mystifying” one of the major revelations so that it’s unclear to both the reader and the characters what is really going on; and 3) I’m giving at least one significant character a juicy secret that ties beautifully into the central storyline and that will give me a nice subplot at the same time.

And finally, I hope to come up with that brilliant last sentence!

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Thank you to my readers who offered new titles for After the Storm! It was a grueling process, going back and forth between author, agent, editor, and the publisher’s marketing department, but we’ve finally settled on Secrets She Left Behind. If you check out the comments to the original post, you’ll see that our frequent commenter, Denise, actually suggested that wording, so she will receive a copy of the book when it’s hot off the shelves in May.

Originally, we were trying to work the word “after” into the title to keep the book linked to Before the Storm, since it’s a sequel, but the right titles simply weren’t coming to us. I’m very happy with this new title. It fits the book perfectly and better reflects the drama and tension that exists in the story.

Thanks so much to all of you who helped!

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I am often asked how much money I make. Seriously, I am. This may occur in a private conversation with (or email query from) a fledgling author, or it may occur at a reading I’m giving at a library or bookstore in front of a hundred people. Do strangers ask those of you who are teachers, doctors, receptionists or fire fighters how much money you make? I didn’t think so. 

Maybe it has to do with being a “public figure” in a society where our celebrities’ lives are fair game. Often, though, I think it has to do with the questioner’s longing to be able to quit his or her day job and write full-time. That’s a longing I understand and looking at the question from that angle makes me want to help. 

Toward that end, I’m going to share a little about this misconception that novelists are rich. This topic is so complicated and multi-faceted, that I’ll only be scratching the surface. Feel free to ask questions and I’ll do my best to answer, but I have to tell you that finding meaningful statistics on what authors earn (ie, what publisher’s pay) is extremely difficult.

My friend, mystery writer Margaret Maron, responds to the “How much money do you make?” question by saying she makes about the same as a teacher. I think that’s a fair answer, and generous of her to offer it. What I usually say is that I am fortunate to be able to support myself as a writer in North Carolina; living in the Washington DC area was much tougher. I dare say that Margaret and I are doing better than the vast majority of writers, however, and we’ve been at it forever and a day.  

Let’s look at the romance genre for a minute. I choose romance because it consistently outsells all other fiction categories and because I do have some stats on what romance authors are paid, thanks to Brenda Hiatt, who has been collecting this information for several years.

It’s impossible to sum up all of Brenda’s information here, but if you check out the link, you’ll see that advances range from zero to $200,000. (This last figure definitely skews the results and most likely went to one or two very lucky and talented authors; the median advance for that particular publisher is $17,500.)  Category romances, such as the Harlequins and Silhouettes you see in the supermarket, average an advance of about $4,000 with an earn out of $12,000.The stand-alone books (ie not category and often called “women’s fiction”) may or may not earn more. Science Fiction author Tobias Buckell has collected similar information for Sci-Fi and Fantasy writers, by the way, and found the median advance for a first time novelist is $5000. 

What do I mean by “earn out?” Generally speaking, an author receives an advance. Let’s say that a particular  author receives an advance of $10,000. She also receives royalties against that advance, meaning that she will not see any more money until her royalties have moved beyond the amount of the advance. A typical royalty rate for a $7 paperback is 8%, so she’ll receive .56 per book sold (which is different than books shipped. It’s not unusual for a full 50% of the books a publisher ships to be returned to the publisher after they’ve languished too long on the bookstore shelves.) If the publisher shipped 50,000 books and 25,000 of them are sold, the author has earned out $14,000 and will receive (eventually. . . sigh. We are paid twice a year) a royalty check for $4,000. If 35,000 books are returned (it happens), the author has been “overpaid” by $1600 in her advance. She will not have to repay this money to the publisher, however.  

Therefore, the author, in this very simplistic example, is now ten thousand dollars richer, correct? Not so fast. Most likely she has an agent, who receives 15% off the top. So the check our author receives is for $8,500. She must then sock away a chunk of that for the taxman, of course, along with the fifteen percent she needs to pay social security, since she’s self employed. (although it’s tempting, I am not even going to mention the cost of health insurance for the self-employed.) 

There are exceptions, and we certainly hear about them. Charles Frazier received an advance of $8 million after the success of Cold Mountain. And we hear of first-time authors receiving million dollar advances when a publishing house thinks it’s discovered the next JK Rowling, but the odds of that happening are about as good as winning the lottery.

I hope this helps clarify some of your questions about “what authors make.” The bottom line is, if writing is your passion, then please keep at it, but do so with your eyes open, your focus on your craft. . . and your day job front and center.  

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